Life is a masquerade; a sea of false facades.
The self hidden behind layers upon layers
Of masks. So much so, that when you look
In the mirror, you can’t even see who you are
Let alone distinguish the mask from the flesh.
Excruciating pain awaits those who dare rip
The masks of their faces.
A bloody mess of papier-mâché and flesh;
A deformed crimson face lies underneath. Thus
New masks are formed when we seek to remove
All other masks. True beauty lies only in belief.
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I love this one. You curb your passion well in this specific poem…
“True beauty lies only in belief.”
Quite true.
Good job! This one’s so wonderful…
I love these lines:
Thus
New masks are formed when we seek to remove
All other masks.
True. So true.
true..
well done.
A++
True said , removing the masks is a painful task !!
Liked this 🙂
PS : I like the name “silvertongue” 🙂
people wear personas everywhere they go and i agree! here’s my potluck argentpoet http://fiveloaf.wordpress.com/2010/01/25/paper-scribbles/
Even when we think we’ve removed the masks, most likely we have not. Beautifully expressed.
http://absolutepalaver.wordpress.com/2011/03/22/life/
A vivd image on the sad truth…
Mmm this is so dark! Yes, we all wear masks of some sort, but who is to say that beneath it/them is a deformed, crimson face? Sure, physically, if we were to remove the skin…but what of the spirit beneath?